Pencil Shavings

Saturday, September 23, 2006

A beach of diamonds

Without her glasses, it seemed to her that she was running on a beach of diamonds.

And in many ways, it was exactly so.

With the unrelentless sun beating against the back of their necks and knees, they hedged their bets on a singular moment: a quantifiable stillness in the movement from here to there. If they stopped to pick the diamonds, or stopped to fly their kite when the dark-skinned man so temptingly said. "Stop here? Wind good. Fly kite.", that singular moment would have slipped away like a mirage in the delusional desert heat.

There are no checkpoints in this journey. There were only hideous looking gods made of the same black glittering sand, watching the two -- what shall we call them? -- migrants making for themselves a trail of footprints as an offering that will be claimed by the sea. The sea always wins. Once in a while they would pass by a coconut tree that gave up, its crown completely buried in the sand, even as the others stood resolutely by with their dry roots exposed.

It was a curse: if they stopped they would lose; if they reached their destination, they would lose, but like condemned gamblers, they put everything they had into that singular and fleeting moment, relegating the crippling pain to a back part of the brain that could not be accessed easily.

And she thought: "Isn't this a lovely beach of diamonds?"

But she lost her glasses to the sea a long time ago.

5 comments:

smudgi3 said...

lovely.

mis_nomer said...

hey, thanks.. :)

Anonymous said...

don't they also call crack cocaine "the rock"?

running addiction is one of Screwtape's sneakiest tricks.

too much of a good thing?

mis_nomer said...

Hi Belial, interesting take on this piece. Tho' I have to assure you, it has nothing to do with crack cocaine! :)

If anything, Screwtape may have convinced me to spend all my energies on physical exercise that is good only for our time on earth, and neglect the stuff of eternity. Thanks for the reminder.

Cowtown Pattie said...

What a great short short story!

Though I must confess, I kept hearing Paul Simon narrate it...