nice... the separation of the sentences and words add to the feeling of coming undone... more may even be better... altho i'm not too sure how...two thumbs up out of two!!
heh. thanks :) I can't have more unless I want more "legs".
ah, so...i thot it was literal, this coming undone thing... which means that all the letters of each sentence starts drifting apart until at the last line, they're so dispersed that it doesn't make sense anymore... hmmm... but legs are good for me too ;-D
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nice... the separation of the sentences and words add to the feeling of coming undone...
more may even be better... altho i'm not too sure how...
two thumbs up out of two!!
heh. thanks :) I can't have more unless I want more "legs".
ah, so...
i thot it was literal, this coming undone thing... which means that all the letters of each sentence starts drifting apart until at the last line, they're so dispersed that it doesn't make sense anymore...
hmmm... but legs are good for me too ;-D
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